You write this in the second person like giving yourself that little bit of distance will provide some perspective, will make it make sense.
You win some, you lose some. You never really noticed the winning, because it’s like when you clean the house. You know, when you really clean it, down on the hands and knees, scrubbing tile cleaning, and you think how nice it looks, and then you walk away and you don’t notice it anymore, because that’s how it’s supposed to look. It’s supposed to look clean, after all, not have dust in the corners. And, you figure, you’re supposed to be happy, to wake up in the morning just a little giddy because things are going your way at last. And that is why you don’t notice, because that is how it’s supposed to be. But when you lose, you notice right away. It’s hard not to pay attention once those just-a-little-giddy mornings are gone.
It’s over. You know this. You knew it before you would admit it to yourself and certainly before you’d admit it to anyone else. You knew it the moment you walked back through that airport terminal alone, when you got into that elevator in the parking garage and your fellow airport-parking-garage-elevator passengers politely avoided looking at you because you were in your own cinematic moment, a few tears streaming silent and unchecked down your cheeks while you stared ahead at the elevator doors. You felt yourself inside the scene, in one of those rare moments when life feels exactly like something out of a movie and you can pretend for a moment that the knot in your stomach isn’t there, or that it’s just as simple as stage fright, that it’s not because in that place where you know things (even though you’re never exactly sure how you know them) you know this is more goodbye than see you later. Every time you answer questions from your friends about your relationship, you feel a little embarrassed, because somehow you know it’s all going to fall apart and you’re going to wind up looking like some dumb lovestruck idiot who didn’t have a clue, but, you figure, at least you didn’t get matching tattoos.
Winter is sudden and bitter, a surprise like it always is. He is distant. There is this reason and that reason, one barrier after another. There is no money, and those phone bills are no joke. There is a problem. There is another problem. There is somebody who may overhear. So you pick up the slack, because you’re in a relationship, and you can’t have a relationship with someone you can’t talk to, after all. Things go wrong for you, too. Things that are difficult, things that are sad. You swallow them and listen instead when you get the chance. He is busy. He is not there. He says he loves you. He doesn’t pick up the phone.
You hang on.
And then he disappears. You find him. You ask if this means what you think it means. He says no. He explains. You believe him, and you believe that he believes himself. He disappears again. You ask him not to. He explains. He disappears again. You ask him not to. He disappears and disappears and you ask and ask and he stops explaining. You ask for an answer. You get silence in return. The silence is your answer, and you know it.
There is no reason, there is no goodbye. You wonder why, what happened. You invent reasons to pass the time: he was kidnapped by pirates, he is trapped under something heavy, he was attacked by ninjas, he has woken up alone in a hospital in Prague and he has amnesia. You go to bed at night and think about the way he rubs his feet together like a tuneless cricket when he’s falling asleep. You think of the way he used to look at you. You think of all the things he was going to do. Was going to. You think of all your known flaws, all the things you might’ve done wrong, and sleep underneath them like a stack of heavy blankets.
You wake up tired.
There is no goodbye, so you say your own to no one. Goodbye. It was lovely for awhile. Let’s never do this again. You pack up all the things he gave you and put them in a box that you will most likely never have the heart to ship. You remove his number from your phone so you won’t be tempted to try anymore, not that he would pick it up if he saw it was you anyway. You slowly start deleting your daydreams. You shrug and call him a coward. You ignore the fact that he didn’t want you to write about him on the internet, because it’s not like it matters anymore anyway. You will keep all of his secrets, except for the one that he ended up being the most afraid of: the one where he existed in your life.
You write this in the second person and it doesn’t make any more sense.
16 thoughts on “moments when there’s nobody to murder”
Oh, dear girl, this is heartbreaking. Heartbroken. I’m so sorry.
Hi Kelsi — thanks. It sucks, don’t get me wrong. It sucks a lot. But the one thing I will say about a slow disintegration like this is that I seem to have adjusted in stages, and when I finally got around to facing what was what, I was a lot further along in the process of letting go than I thought I would be. So there’s that, and it helps.
I’m looking for the “Like, because it’s well written, but it makes me sad” button. It’s around here someplace.
so thickly sad, but so brilliantly said. but so sad. and those flickr photos on the right add to it all.
hugs, jam. in time, first person thoughts will return.
oh friend, i’m so sorry.
you write like a movie and it’s pretty brilliant.
i’m glad to hear that you’re starting to heal. but it sucks that you have to.
You write your pain so well….sorry to hear.
Hi. I’ve lived through worse, and I’m living through this. Plus now I have all kinds of new material.
I’m sorry. You, as always, are eloquent.
at least you didn’t get matching tattoos…
I think that’s the best any of us can hope for, right?
Love you, babe.
It’s very much like the old Ronald Coleman line, “It is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.”
But the irony is you never feel that way after the fact, you feel as if it might have been better just to avoid the pain of it all. And it’s not like a punch in the nose where you are bloodied but it is a smack where it tingles and there is pain.
So, you pick yourself up, dust yourself off and steel yourself to face the world again.
And each day will drag on but as the days pass little by little that pain will go away and be replaced by a hunger, a hunger once more to plunge back in, hopefully a little wiser but not jaded by past hurts and able to open up your heart once more.
And it will happen too… eventually. When you let it.
The trick is not to allow yourself one moment more than necessary to heal.
In the meantime, even strangers can feel empathy for you because we all carry the scars of past battles of the heart.
My heart aches for you. Your pain is so familiar. As pj said, we all carry the scars of past battles of the heart. Trust me, for I have more years and many more scars–let yourself heal. Life will go on and happiness will smack you in the face when you least expect it.
You are loved by all your friends. Your writing is eloquent, vividly descriptive. Use the writing as a catharsis. It will get easier.
Be kind to yourself. He’s the loser, he lost you.
I am sorry for your pain, and glad for your healing. I can relate all too well…..
Thanks for sharing so eloquently; it has helped.
I’m sure all Jamelah fans would agree with Susan. she said it better than i ever could. xo
I’m doing okay, and every day just that much better.
Thank you all for the kind words.